Monday, 18 May 2015

Term 2, Lesson 15

Media today was spent going over my treatment, perfecting it and completing my log line in trying to make it interesting for inviting for the reader. I ended up with the log line of:

Inspired by the only female drag racer to win the tournament, Piper Hart is determine to follow her footsteps no matter what obstacles she is confronted with on her way.

This invites the reader and interests them in what the treatment will be about. I also decided on the title Night Mini’s the only reason I chose this is because I was really stuck on a title and it was all I could think of as the film is about drag racing Mini's at night. I am not happy with it and will definitely change it in the rough edit.

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